Wednesday, April 18, 2018
Soft drinks
Nowadays, soft drinks take over an important role in the society that more and more people prefer to drink soft drinks instead of water, and soft drinks become very popular all around the world . However, these soft drinks are bad for human's body and even would bring people some serious illnesses. In my personal perspective, the school should stop selling those soft drinks in the cafeteria. Instead of soft drinks, the cafeteria can sells some coffee, juice, milk or some low-sugar drinks. First of all, those high-sugar soft drinks also call "carbonated drinks" which contains a lots of carbonic acid, and this element would react with our bone and causes people losing their Calcium from their bone and which would made them break people bone easily. Especially, during teenager's growing period these drinks would wreck their bones badly and causing their bones become calcium deficiency. Second, these high-sugar drinks would make people become really fat, the sugar produce calories and they would make people become fat, once people become fat there is a possibility that these fat people would have some illnesses. Such as, diabetes or some heart disease. In addition, the fatness would depress people that they probably cannot do well on sports or look bad because of the fatness, or even some students would treat them mean because of the fatness. In conclusion, high-sugar soft drinks are inappropriate for students due to their unhealthy factor.
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I agree! Why is everything good so bad for you?! Ugh! Please proofread AGAIN to correct for grammatical errors! 16/20
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